It's a little past 11:17- I just got home from head drawing class. One of the several self-serving purposes of this blog is to help me see what my level of progress is (as a motivational tool, in other words.) Below are two head drawings. The first one is the head drawing from tonight. The second is one that I really liked from about a year ago.
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| 11-15-2010 |
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| 11-??-2009 |
To me, it seems like the newer images has some advantages: It's at a more consistent level of finish throughout the drawing- The mouth, nose, eyes, etc are all "working" together somewhat (though not as well as I'd like.) The older one has some funky areas where it looks like I threw some tone down hoping I would be able to fix it later. (See the left side of the neck below the too-small ear.) The first drawing also has somewhat superior structure in the mouth and browline area, and has better symmetry overall. (Especially the eyes.)
I'm still making the bridge of the nose too wide though, gotta remember that for next time.
Anyway, getting back to the purpose of this post: The Spectrum contest: For this years contest I am making my first-ever illustration, following a process that I will post step by step as the weeks roll by until I submit my entry (if it's not too embarrassing) by January 8th, the deadline.
I don't want to be up until 1am, so I am going to run through the first step in the process tonight, and follow up with the rest of the steps I have taken later in the week.
For most illustrators, the ideation process begins with thumbnails. I didn't know what I wanted to paint right away, so I started out cycling through a bunch of ideas. At first, I thought I might kill two birds with one stone by doing an illustration based on an idea for an album cover I had for the band Scarlet Stoic involving a character with a red cloak blowing in the wind, it's torn edges ending in hands grasping forward (lower left):
After spending some time fleshing the idea out, I realized that for the purposes of an illustration, it wasn't telling a coherent story, and abandoned it as an idea for the Spectrum contest and moved on to an idea centered on my favorite animal: The Klipspringer - Highest jumping mammal. I also really like dung beetles (Yes, I know I like random animals.) I thought it might be cool to have a tribe of elves riding klipspringers doing battle with a giant menacing dung beetle-like creature... gosh, that doesn't really sound cool now. :-) Some of these lack narrative as well, although I sort of liked the one in the center and worked on it for a while. Ultimately I decided it wasn't dynamic enough (looking at it now I wished I had picked it because it would have been easy.)
More thumbnails, trying to come up with an idea that has action, but is also coherent and tells a story.
I lost interest in dung beetles entirely and started focusing on the klipspringers and their riders. Erik Gist encouraged me to pursue the images at right of center (the ones with the characters in midair.) He said to push the 3-dimensionality and change the angle a bit.
My vision for this painting is a group of elves with face paint and flowing hair and cloaks, riding on klipspringers at dawn. Ideally, they will look as though they are bounding through the air. I want the painting to be dreamlike. I got the go ahead from Erik on this one, and started the next step.
Stay tuned for STEP 2: The Agony of Collecting Reference
J


I like the shadowing in the new head drawing much better - the shading under the chin is weird on the old one.
ReplyDeleteI really like the "reaches for quiver" thumbnail. I think that could be made to be both interesting yet slightly funny and cartoonish.
I like the one you chose too, curious to see where it goes.
- Scooter
P.S. Good move on ditching the dung.
lol, dung beetle!
ReplyDeletei guess i see the fluidity of the first head more so than the second. to me it seems like you spent more time on the second, or at least the strokes seem more calculated. The first one flows more. though i love the detail in the eyes of the older one.
good luck with your contest piece, the concepts all look pretty cool to me, even the beetle ones. haha.
@Scott - That's one of the things about thumbnails, you just have to pick one! Someday I will probably end up doing a more iconic design like the "reaches for quiver."
ReplyDelete@Penga - It's true, there are some things about the old drawing that are better (the nose.) I think that I have lost something in terms of "polish" but gained something in the area of "cohesion." I think that the instructor might have done that nose... :-)